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Excellent point on the archery skill aspect at the beginning of the chapter. I can’t count how many new privates I’ve seen, coming from rural areas especially, boasting of their shooting and hunting experience and how marksmanship should be “so easy”.

There is a world of difference between hunting deer with a 10x scope, or shooting on a civilian firing range, and rifle marksmanship with iron sights while wearing body armor and helmets, not to mention the added stress of timed completion and the shooter having to shift targets when they pop up. And that’s just talking about the training! Real combat is an order of magnitude worse.

Typos/word choice recommendations:

He stumbled out to the side where his fellow recruits were getting figuring out how to wear the armor.

Getting —> gathering, or remove word entirely

The greaves were too long that they jabbed the tops of his feet.

too —> so

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