Hmm, looks like the politics plot and the mage plot are connected in ways I can't see yet. Also, great magic battle! I love all the crazy stuff Hanro did, like the bubble of water on the head. Magic should be dangerous and imaginative like that instead of just being a hard magic system. Makes the mages feel more unpredictable.
I'm glad you loved it, in a world with mage hunters the magic has to be unpredictable and viscious. They'll be more wild magic in future chapters, that's for sure!
Hmm, looks like the politics plot and the mage plot are connected in ways I can't see yet. Also, great magic battle! I love all the crazy stuff Hanro did, like the bubble of water on the head. Magic should be dangerous and imaginative like that instead of just being a hard magic system. Makes the mages feel more unpredictable.
Mmm, doesn't it just...
I'm glad you loved it, in a world with mage hunters the magic has to be unpredictable and viscious. They'll be more wild magic in future chapters, that's for sure!