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Man should not go places he doesn't understand.

He might come across a skull as big a giant hand.

Eyes of fire, breath of stone, cold as ice, again and again.

Best be careful, best be aware, lest the long dead voices call

and your short short life they hold in thrall.

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That was so strange. It kept me riveted to the screen. I was just as lost as the character. Excellent build up of tension and anxiety. The constant search for the elusive answer. Very well done.

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Thank you, always good to hear when a story works as intended!

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