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Very nice. Aedir was calm, collected, and dangerous.

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Thank you! I found Aedir a lot of fun to write and there will be more of him.

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I really liked that. The writing was fast and crisp. I liked how you kept the pipe handy. It was a simple demon story that had all the right elements. Highly enjoyable. Great!

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Thank you, great to hear you enjoyed this tale! 😁

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Perfectly paced. I couldn't stop reading until I knew how the demon committed his crimes, and you filled the space between with some drama between the three suspects, a prison break, and a fantastic action scene. Also, Aedir and Salwell should definitely show up again, like some kind of Buddy-Cop duo.

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Thank you. Marvellous to hear such enjoyment. Aedir will return, not sure about Salwell yet but there's certainly opportunity.

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