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The man reminded me of Odysseus in Homer's Odyssey, when his raft is blasted apart by Poseidon's waves, and he just manages to swim ashore on Scheria.

Too bad for this man, it doesn't seem like he's met flock of young maids.

Really good piece, especially for minimal edits. I liked the sea descriptions: yawning, growling, massive grey silhouettes.

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Thank you for the kind words, glad you enjoyed it.

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