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Ben Woestenburg's avatar

Okay Redd, this is coming along great. I love the personality of all the characters. The droid is rather different, isn't he? I like the descriptions of the jungle, but maybe more detail, I don't know. I like how we're left hanging with the group they passed along the way, knowing we'll have to either meet them on the way back, or join them in the fight at the ship. It's a great little mystery as to who is chasing them. Excellent all around, because I know you'll bring it all back together.

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Gloria Horton-Young's avatar

No. Wait! What? I hate serial stories !!!!!! And, I’m sucked into this one big time.

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