Ha! I liked this one. It made me sit up at the beginning there when her pet has mandibles. 😂 There was a fantasy writer I read back in the ‘80s called Sherri S. Tepper who wrote a novel called “Grass” that came to mind as I was reading this tale of yours.
Absolute tension from start to finish: I was thumbing my phone screen in a blur just trying to keep up with the speed I was reading. My favorite part was Frey using the pissing guard as a distraction, giving just enough of an edge to escape. Also, the spider-pet. That's just plain cool.
Thank you for the kind words, great to hear the specifics too. It's a little ridiculous but if a burglar talking about someone pissing it would definitely catch me off guard for a moment. 😁 Thanks for reading!
Thank you! I love the lively tone. Your story is alive, living and breathing.
Maybe I’ve missed it, I tend to read too quickly, but you got to tell me - WHAT IS JASPAR?! (I’m sorry if I’ve written the name wrongly, I can’t check it out from my phone without losing this comment) Eight legs, red eyes, furry, eats rats...?
Yeah, huzzah, bravo.
Frey flies into action
followed by her spider friend
all to take back to
her home the sacred chalice.
I would buy any book that had such a heroine. She's brave, she's nervous,
She's not a superwoman who could be four soldiers.
More, more, more, I demand it.
Stoked you enjoyed Frey and Jaspar's antics so much. Thank you. There's certainly more to tell.
Ha! I liked this one. It made me sit up at the beginning there when her pet has mandibles. 😂 There was a fantasy writer I read back in the ‘80s called Sherri S. Tepper who wrote a novel called “Grass” that came to mind as I was reading this tale of yours.
Thank you! Yes, a sirog is a strange beast.
I haven't read Tepper but her books sounds intriguing, thanks.
Absolute tension from start to finish: I was thumbing my phone screen in a blur just trying to keep up with the speed I was reading. My favorite part was Frey using the pissing guard as a distraction, giving just enough of an edge to escape. Also, the spider-pet. That's just plain cool.
Thank you for the kind words, great to hear the specifics too. It's a little ridiculous but if a burglar talking about someone pissing it would definitely catch me off guard for a moment. 😁 Thanks for reading!
Thank you! I love the lively tone. Your story is alive, living and breathing.
Maybe I’ve missed it, I tend to read too quickly, but you got to tell me - WHAT IS JASPAR?! (I’m sorry if I’ve written the name wrongly, I can’t check it out from my phone without losing this comment) Eight legs, red eyes, furry, eats rats...?
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the story so thoroughly.
Jaspar is a sirog. Imagine a cross between a jumping spider and an Irish wolfhound, close to that I'd say.
Jaspar sounds really cool! Is he your creation or a mythological creature?
Thanks, he is my creation 🙂