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Oh, and thanks for adding the next chapter links to the END of the post and well.

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Excellent progress in moving the story forward, without seeming to leave anything unsaid.

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Thank you, glad to hear you're enjoying the story.

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This is coming along really nicely. I love the authenticity of the environment.

I wanted to point out that Chapter 2 doesn’t seem to have a working hyperlink to Chapter 3.

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Thanks so much! I’m glad the details are paying off :)

Ahh, I will get to fixing that as soon as I can. Thank you for pointing it out.

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