Fantastic! I love it as the adventure picks up and everything is moving the way it is it really gets me wondering things. Looking forward to read more as they embark to Silicia.
That was incredible! Very impressive opening, going from zero to sixty in only a few paragraphs. No info dumps, yet we can still see a perfect picture, not only of the main character, but also his family, his village and even his culture.
"The Assyrian came down like the wolf on the fold, And his cohorts were gleaming in purple and gold"
The attack immediately reminded me of The Destruction of Sennacherib by Byron. I'll echo what others have said too; the art is fantastic.
That poem is beautiful.
Thank you!
Great start, looking forward to finding out more. And I love the picture at the start too :)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed reading.
What a way to start a story. It could go in many different ways, from vengeance to survival to a hero's arc. I can't wait to see what comes next.
Thanks! Glad to hear you enjoyed this opening. Next week we will meet Prince Lothan.
Fantastic! I love it as the adventure picks up and everything is moving the way it is it really gets me wondering things. Looking forward to read more as they embark to Silicia.
Thank you, glad to hear you enjoyed chapter 1! I hope you enjoy the rest.
That was incredible! Very impressive opening, going from zero to sixty in only a few paragraphs. No info dumps, yet we can still see a perfect picture, not only of the main character, but also his family, his village and even his culture.
Always good to hear the parts I aimed to do well with did their job, thank you.
Oh, I like this! So much potential. I can't wait to get into it.
Thank you! Means a lot to hear that. Hope the story lives up to the potential.
Solid start - let's see where Tobin takes us.
Thank you!