Devastation
I loved this passage. So visual! It's like the glow was filled in by the feelings that followed.
(Also, I'm just a big sucker for magic items in stories.)
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The glow of Famfrit’s Jewel granted him a soothing warmth, that healed his minor aches, strains, and wounds.
Thanks so much!
A powerful start! Looking forward to reading more about Famfrit’s Jewel and who the guys are who took it!
I loved this passage. So visual! It's like the glow was filled in by the feelings that followed.
(Also, I'm just a big sucker for magic items in stories.)
......
The glow of Famfrit’s Jewel granted him a soothing warmth, that healed his minor aches, strains, and wounds.
Thanks so much!
A powerful start! Looking forward to reading more about Famfrit’s Jewel and who the guys are who took it!