The infinite wine dark sea stretched outward in all directions.
"Who has existed since before your God was but a contradiction, a disgrace..."
Could the demon be referring to the Incarnation here? 🤔
We need more Catholic space marines in fiction. 🔥
YES.
Pray without ceasing,
that the order
can kick the ass
of the ancient chaos being.
Thanks for the poem!
Gotta say I liked it. It was a little difficult getting into it at first, but once I was able to sort things out, I was all in.
Good to hear, thanks! This was a little more dense of a world, glad you got into it.
I felt like I was right there with them. Loved that they carried scrolls of hymnals as their "weapons" of choice. Just a little snippet of a much larger universe.
Thanks for the positive feedback, good to hear it was engrossing. Never underestimate the power of song.
"Who has existed since before your God was but a contradiction, a disgrace..."
Could the demon be referring to the Incarnation here? 🤔
We need more Catholic space marines in fiction. 🔥
YES.
Pray without ceasing,
that the order
can kick the ass
of the ancient chaos being.
Thanks for the poem!
Gotta say I liked it. It was a little difficult getting into it at first, but once I was able to sort things out, I was all in.
Good to hear, thanks! This was a little more dense of a world, glad you got into it.
I felt like I was right there with them. Loved that they carried scrolls of hymnals as their "weapons" of choice. Just a little snippet of a much larger universe.
Thanks for the positive feedback, good to hear it was engrossing. Never underestimate the power of song.