Arrival into Sageburn
Good one
Thanks!
Good start! Oh how a little greed can get people into a pickle.
Thank you!
Wow, I'm getting an Amityville vibe from the story. It must be the flies.
It kind of makes me wonder if the mine didn't open up into a part of hell.
Thanks! I haven't seen or read Amityville but I'm hoping that's a good thing, haha.
I will remain silent on what/where the mine is/goes/opens into.
Really enjoyed the deliberate build up with the odd hints,here and there, that all is not what it seems in this El Dorado. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes
Thank you, very glad to hear you enjoyed this chapter.
Subtle. I like that. Knowing it's you, I know I'm in for a good ride. Can't wait.
Thank you for the high praise!
Good one
Thanks!
Good start! Oh how a little greed can get people into a pickle.
Thank you!
Wow, I'm getting an Amityville vibe from the story. It must be the flies.
It kind of makes me wonder if the mine didn't open up into a part of hell.
Thanks! I haven't seen or read Amityville but I'm hoping that's a good thing, haha.
I will remain silent on what/where the mine is/goes/opens into.
Really enjoyed the deliberate build up with the odd hints,here and there, that all is not what it seems in this El Dorado. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes
Thank you, very glad to hear you enjoyed this chapter.
Subtle. I like that. Knowing it's you, I know I'm in for a good ride. Can't wait.
Thank you for the high praise!