That was a creepy picture to start off with. I liked how the bigger picture details and implications were weaved in through the story, such as the monsters being tainted souls. The main character felt rather mysterious with the hints towards his past.
Excellent world building in this story! I felt like I was living inside a D&D Monster Manual. ⚔️⚔️⚔️
Marvellous to know it had punch. Thanks!
Not quiet Bilbo riddling with Smaug, but excellently written.
Drawn I was, into the story and immersed in rotten streams
of poisons and vapors.
Now I wonder what happened that turned her into a floral arrangement.
Thank you for the poem, glad you enjoyed the tale.
I felt like I was playing a fantasy RPG—great visuals!
Thank you! Pleased you enjoyed it.
Wow this is such an interesting read
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.
That was a creepy picture to start off with. I liked how the bigger picture details and implications were weaved in through the story, such as the monsters being tainted souls. The main character felt rather mysterious with the hints towards his past.
Thanks for the detailed critique, always good to know what went well (or not).