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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

Romance requires a bit more attention to detail, than general fiction and fantasy. You have to be careful not break continuity and you have to keep account on what they say to each other.

Will her promise of love today survive tomorrow, if he loses a leg? Will his love for her outlast the next buxom beauty that catches his eyes?

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The Man Behind the Screen's avatar

I'm honored that you found my story so enjoyable as to inspire this. A wonderfully told little romance. I adore the banter between Casparian and Irilina at the beginning. All the dialogue is a lot of fun to read and the visuals for the plane they traveled to are both creative and whimsical, at least up until the demons arrive. Very fun story!

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